Creepy.

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Luna Lisa
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Creepy.

Postby Luna Lisa » Tue Jan 25, 2011 5:46 pm

The Waiting and Creeping of Death
By: Lisa Dunbar (Luna Lisa)

Because of you my heart is full of despair.
And death is now creeping its way into my bones.
My bones are cold. almost as death itself.
for death and despair is what I wait.
Now that I'm the only one left no one can hear me scream in anguish and torture.
As death comes creeping into my bones and veins.
For my body is nothing but a death trap.
As death creeps I get colder.
Then when it's my time to go death
Will not creep any longer.
Death is always waiting always creeping.
For these old bones are getting brittle and now death takes a toll.
A new toll equals new life.
And as for thses old bones of mine.
Death is creeping.
Death is waiting.
Death is watching.

I wrote this poem when I was about 18 and was going through some tough times. And instead of cutting my wrists drawing and writing seems to help.. every one of my friends thinks that it was creepy. :D

FireWolf168

Re: Creepy.

Postby FireWolf168 » Sat Jan 29, 2011 10:59 am

I really like this it reminds me of some of my early stuff from about 15 years ago, ive written over 5000 poems all told but i still find my early stuff the most invigorating if you know what i mean.

My favourite one i wrote when my first serious relationship ended and is still my fav.

Love Is Death

Death alone from Love can save, Yet love is Death and so is brave, Love can fill the deepest grave.

As you can see its short but i love it, over the years i have extended and stuff but i still love the feeling i get when i read it.

Keep up the writing

Luna Lisa
Posts: 102
Joined: Fri Jan 21, 2011 9:16 pm

Re: Creepy.

Postby Luna Lisa » Wed Feb 02, 2011 7:45 pm

Thanks firewolf. I have to keep myself occuipied from cutting my wrists. Even though it's been about 4 months since I stopped. I've been stopping off and on. But I also joined a support group. and I hope it helps. Your short poem is great too. It has a big meaning for a short peom. :D

FireWolf168

Re: Creepy.

Postby FireWolf168 » Thu Feb 03, 2011 12:44 pm

Thanks for that
Anytime you wanna chat pm me if im on ill always answer.

Goddess Bless

Luna Lisa
Posts: 102
Joined: Fri Jan 21, 2011 9:16 pm

Re: Creepy.

Postby Luna Lisa » Thu Feb 03, 2011 1:28 pm

thanks firewolf.


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