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More depressing poetry from Wolf

Postby Wolf* » Wed Nov 30, 2005 12:34 am

Fate Lost

Chasing mind, fleeting thought
Nothing gained, nothing brought
Sanity escaping, madness entrapping
Black and white, grey overlapping
Tension high, standards low
Too many thoughts, will overflow
No more anger, no more hate
No more peace, there is no fate
I cannot stand, run not crawl
I cannot speak, scream it all
Inside my shell, all alone
Insights deep, should have grown
Life is nothing, yet most precious
World is beautiful, yet most viscious
Lost forever, I shall fall
No way out, no hope at all



as always, critique and comments are welcome and encouraged.
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Postby Moon_Stone » Fri Dec 02, 2005 5:05 pm

Whoa Wolf... seek therapy. :wink:

*Really though, beautiful poem. You have a way with words. :28:
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Postby Wolf* » Fri Dec 02, 2005 8:48 pm

Whoa Wolf... seek therapy :wink:
I've heard that many a time XD
Really though, beautiful poem. You have a way with words.
Thank you very much. :D
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Postby Moon_Stone » Sat Dec 03, 2005 6:50 pm

red1

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Postby [Haley] » Wed Dec 07, 2005 4:52 pm

Great poem as always! :D Damn, I wish I was that good! :D
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Postby missy » Wed Dec 07, 2005 9:52 pm

Nice work Wolf. :wink:
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Postby Wolf* » Sun Dec 11, 2005 1:39 am

Thank you, thank you. Always thrilled to know my work is appreciated :D
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