Our journeys through this world

[Suki1016]

Our hearts reach out to the ripples
In the water of the universe
And our actions may triple
May it be soft heal of harsh curse.

And our deep eyes search
For our light in the darkness
A place where our souls may perch
Recovering from momentary weakness

Our feet are sometimes weary
From our crude walks in the shadows
And the path is often blurry
But our hearts are aglow

Journeys never end
And we find this to be a truth
As we watch the ripples blend
To our last moment from our youth.

This is a poem I worked up while I was in a deep mood. Please tell me what you think. I know its weird and confusing, but I think of the universe as a gigantic pool and our actions make changes in it. I guess that could help alittle bit. tell me whatcha think!

[Sercee]

Wow, Suki, that's nearly bang on with the way I see it. Everyone and everything are connected by the same energy and what you do sends those 'ripples' out and affects their energy, too. And Vice Versa.

That's why I like to do random nice things and smile because it starts good ripples.

Nice Poem!

[Sobek]

it wasnt too bad, but it really got good on the last stanza.

[Suki1016]

that's ok. I knew the last line wasn't a complete wonder lol. And thanks Sercee. I really do think of the world as a large pool. It helps to explain certain things to people or just give me peace of mind.