Do you really love me?

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sunstoneleo
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Do you really love me?

Postby sunstoneleo » Sat Jan 12, 2008 10:51 am

Do you really love me?
Why do you not try?
Is it me you want,
I won't ask why.

I already know the truth,
You love someone else,
You don't want me.
Why must you lie to yourself?

I show you I care,
I tell you I love you,
I get nothing in return,
Why do I love you?

I know your secret,
You never cared,
You love someone else.
That's why you're scared.

So leave me now,
Or tell more lies,
I don't care anymore,
It will be you I despise.
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Rob899
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Postby Rob899 » Sat Jan 12, 2008 11:00 am

wow.

Thats really a really nice and meaningful poem!
Robert
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sunstoneleo
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Postby sunstoneleo » Sat Jan 12, 2008 11:07 am

Thanks!
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Revolpathon
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Postby Revolpathon » Sat Jan 12, 2008 11:09 am

powerfull

it was very well written.

wow.
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sunstoneleo
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Postby sunstoneleo » Sat Jan 12, 2008 11:11 am

Thanks everyone for your replies. I just started writing poems a few months ago, and I found out I have a talent for it :)
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Pixie 89
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Re: Do you really love me?

Postby Pixie 89 » Mon Dec 15, 2008 2:15 am

Do you really love me?
Why do you not try?
Is it me you want,
I won't ask why.

I already know the truth,
You love someone else,
You don't want me.
Why must you lie to yourself?

I show you I care,
I tell you I love you,
I get nothing in return,
Why do I love you?

I know your secret,
You never cared,
You love someone else.
That's why you're scared.

So leave me now,
Or tell more lies,
I don't care anymore,
It will be you I despise.



Amazing poem, I like it! :)
Yours truly,
*Pixie*
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sweetxivy

Postby sweetxivy » Mon Dec 15, 2008 3:18 pm

wow. That was awesome. very....meaningful.awesome:) lol.
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