If only...(one of my poems hope u like it)

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Yuna

If only...(one of my poems hope u like it)

Postby Yuna » Mon Nov 14, 2005 2:06 pm

If only …
If only he felt
The way she feels
He'd know that her love is so real.
If only he knew
She's not like the others
He'd know that they meant to be lovers.
If only he felt
The love in her touch
He'd probably feel that he needs her so much.
If only he knew
That he's the one meant in her song
He'd regret for what took him so long.
If only he knew
That's she the one he's looking for
He'd heal all the pain he caused
And hurt her no more.
If only he knew
How much is her love
He'd know that loving her back isn't enough.
If only he could feel,
If only he could know,
He would love her forever
And never let her go.

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Postby Starpetra » Mon Nov 14, 2005 5:03 pm

That's lovely Yuna, Well done.

Starpetra
Of Fairies, Witches, Gypsies,
My nourrice sang to me ,
Sua Gypsies, Fairies, Witches,
I alsua synge to thee."
("Denham Tract.")

Yuna

Postby Yuna » Mon Nov 14, 2005 5:17 pm

thank you so much that was really encouraging

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Postby Starpetra » Wed Nov 16, 2005 7:41 am

Good, keep up the good work :)

Starpetra
Of Fairies, Witches, Gypsies,
My nourrice sang to me ,
Sua Gypsies, Fairies, Witches,
I alsua synge to thee."
("Denham Tract.")


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