They are nothing special, but i'd still like to share some
Falling
You had to leave
Left me alone
Took away my love
Turned my heart into stone
Was it really your time
Were you ment to go
Questions unanswered
I need to know
I miss you so much
Miss you unconditional love
If there is a heaven
Send a sign from above
I loved you daddy
And I tried to stand tall
But I can't hold on much longer
I am starting to fall
Ending
I will not fall
I will not cry
I must survive
No time to die
Pain and suffering
Blood and tears
I must go on
And face my fears
This life is ending
Though I still feel
I can't live on
Your death is real
These two poems i wrote when i was 13, after my father died...
I had a really hard time coping with it, specialy because i never had a change to say goodbye. I hadn't seen him for 5 weeks, and at the cremation.. well.. things were just weird with my family (as always)
Painfull lies
It's cold outside
But I'm colder within
Cause you've confessed
Your darkest sin
When I heard those words
I started to cry
Cause you told me
Your love was a lie
I'm hopelessly lost
How could this be
How could you not
Be honest with me
This poem i wrote when i was 17, after i found out my boyfriend cheated on me with my best friend...
My world
Try to smile when you're lonely
Try to laugh when you're down
Cause all people must be equal
Man or woman, white or brown
But that is not how the world is
That is not what people feel
They are struggling for excistence
They try to keep it real
People are scared of the unknown
They are afraid of what they see
And I wonder, is this my world
The world in wich I want to be
Dead Inside
I hide how I feel
I pretend to be perfect
I deny who I am
In every aspect
People think I'm strong
That i'm the perfect being
But I'm am nothing like that
I just keep on fleeing
I try to help out everyone
Forget the last time I cried
I just don't feel for myself
I am dead inside
These two poems i wrote during a time when i was very depressed, and just didn't know what to do with myself. I tried to hide from my own problems by trying to solve everyone elses...
You've lost the will
The emptyness between us
Was filled with words unspoken
The love that we once felt, destroyed
Your promises were broken
You've lost the will to trust me
You've lost the will to try
I lay here in this darkened room
All I can do is cry
The darkness in between us
Was filled with mistrust and lies
And in my heart i know it's true
I see it in your eyes
You've lost the will to love me
You've lost the will to try
I lay here in this darkened room
And all I do is cry
This poem was written about a year ago, after a very bad break up...
Well... as i said, my poems are nothing special... But i would like some feedback if you have some
Any tips on how to improve things are welcome...