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the understanding

Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 4:14 am
by vonigan
sleepless nights it gnashes and gnaws

like a jagged splinter

from dragging this cross

it becomes a bit too much

I'll never know it's name

but I will forever know its touch

this ghost of mine that never leaves


:oops: I've never let anyone read anything that I have written, so you all will be the first.

Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 5:42 am
by Sobek
thats interesting, it seems like its going somewhere but doesnt quite reach.

"I'll never know it's name

but I will forever know its touch"

...powerful lines there.