Everything Under the Moon

I lay motionless in this thick rain cover I think of you, wishing, wanting just you to be here. There's lightning then thunder, now the rain is lifting. Soaked I'd hope for a hand to get warm but all I get is a grumble of thunder and icy wind in the absence of your place.

This is intense. Sounds like lyrics to a tragic love song. I like it. I wish it were a longer read.

Very intense it puts me right in the place you describe. You should continue it.