My Poems (They're kinda grusome)

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My Poems (They're kinda grusome)

Postby [Haley] » Thu Nov 10, 2005 4:46 pm

These are all of my poems.

Quiet
Shh, don't speak.
Make a move and I'll slit your wrists!
Try to run and I'll find you.
Scream and I'll rip your tongue out!
Attack me and you're Dead!


Come Back To Me
Screaming, Punching, Clawing!
Running away from fright.
Drowning in paranoia.
Please, come to back to me.

Outburst[/b]
Bitch!
You make me scream inside!
Stop!
Just shut up and apologize!

Lost
Skeleton fingers pressing in my throat.
Choking, struggling for air.
I claw and punch my way free.
As I'm sprinting from the bony creature,
A maze of trees and rubble cross my path,
I lose my way.
The creature moves in,
I'm traped!
I fear I'll never be free.

Remorse
I cried in my room as night fell.
Guilty could discribe how I felt.
I heard a tapping on my window,
I turn to see my friend.
He signals me to come.
We walk for miles.
We find a stream and I rush towards it.
I wash the blood off of my hands and cry again.


I have one more but I have to go. Will post later.

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Postby [Haley] » Fri Nov 11, 2005 7:15 am

Here's my last one.


Death Is The Only Way
I'm silent. He waits.
I'm fed up.
I pounce.
He says he can't hit a girl but does anyway.
I'm out cold.
I come to in a dark room.
A light comes on.
I'm surrounded by needles.
I hear his voice, he says they're filled with poison.
There is no escaping.


The first one Quiet is about my rage towards this girl at school. The secound one is well just what it says an outburst (same girl). The third poem Come Back to Me has no meaning really I just knida wrote it.
Lost is about my really skinny friend who I'm pissed at. Remorse is again just something that has no meaning and was just written. Death Is The Only Way is about my battle against the people at school who talk about me. The needles represent the prick I get when they ask about my necklace and stare at me.

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Postby Moon_Stone » Fri Nov 11, 2005 6:52 pm

Wow, Mrwyer... those are quite some poems. It is often said that poetry is a safe expression of emotions, and it seems you can feel quite hostile when it comes to peers, so please, keep writing! :28:

(Thank you for sharing) :28:

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Postby [Haley] » Sat Nov 12, 2005 10:46 pm

Yes I am very hostile. I have more poems.


Socity
I stare at my self in the mirror,
Looking at all the imperections.
I try to wish them away, but fail.
I think of the pictures of the girls in magizines.
I get mad because I don't look like them,
But relax when I remember beauty is on the inside.
I turn away from the mirror and burn the pictures.
Screw socity, I'm beautiful already.

The Past
She enters the room,
They look at her strangly.
She becomes paranoid.
They edge away form her.
She notices a mirror and goes to look in it.
She sees markings, scars on her face,
She recalls every memory made by each one.
Her hand involentarly punches the mirror,
She breaks down wanting her memories to cease.
Everyone leaves the room.

Them
They're laughing,
I'm sitting there quietly listening.
I'm inveous of them.
She makes stupid jokes and wise cracks,
It causes the other to laugh.
They hang out, talk, have things in common,
They have a bond.
I have nothing with her.
I'm jealous.
It sickens me.
I can't take it.
So I leave the room like I always do.

Math Class
I'm in third period,
The Bitch sits accross from me.
I get neverous, cold, and sweaty.
What will she say to me today?
I feel her stare,
I glance at her and she gives me a look.
I turn away,
She whispers about me.
My nerves worsen as she asks me the same question.
I try to ignore her, but she persists.
I can't take it any longer,
I lunge at her and jab my pencil in her eye.
My friend shakes me,
She tells me class is over.
The Bitch's eye is fine but her mouth has the runs.
It was all a daydream.
Damn.

Without Me
I supress me tears as she leaves,
It seems like they all hate me.
I wonder what life would be like if I never existed.
Would anyone care?
Would they miss me if they knew?
Would my friends still be together?
Or would it be a perfect world for everyone?
I wonder...


I've got to go. Meanings will follow later.
I enjoy feedback, so please speak your mind.

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Postby Wolf* » Sat Nov 12, 2005 11:12 pm

Well, I've always prefered rhyme schemes, but other than that there is alot of emotion and feeling. All in all, they are very nice :)
---Wolf---

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Postby [Haley] » Sun Nov 13, 2005 8:31 am

Thanks Wolf! I like rhyme schemes as but I'm just not good at rhyming.

The Meanings:
Society is self-explainatory.
The Past is about my bad memories or scars that I don't want to remember.
Them is about the relationship between my mom and old sister, and how I'm not that close to my mom. The person that's laughing the second time is my mom how finds my sister's jokes funny.
Math Class is about that girl I mentioned earlier always asking me if I'm a witch or what my necklace means. If I had the opprotunity and guts I would absolutly jab her eye out. When I said she had the runs from her mouth that meant she was talking about me again but more intensly. I wasn't kidding when I said I get nervous in class. Sometimes even before I get in the room I get sweaty, cold and a little twitchy. Could anyone help with that problem by any chance?
Without Me is something I wrote after my mom got pissed at me. Self-Explainatory.


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