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The elements

Posted: Mon Dec 03, 2007 11:16 pm
by JacklynSnyder1o1
Fire:
Burning with desire
Red with love
Hot with anger
Kinetic with energy

Earth:
Strong
Sturdy
Part of mother nature.

Water:
Flowing
Energetic
Part of everything on Earth

Air:
Free
Fresh
Crisp
The breath of mother nature

Spirit:
Can come free or held down.
What allows you to dance in the rain.
Innocence.
The only thing that one can lose that makes one nothing but a soulless body.

Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2007 8:01 am
by jcrowfoot
I dunno why, but the last line on "Spirit" doesn't really scan.

Something like: "[Only] without this are we truly empty" or something like that would work better.

Otherwise, I like this bunch best of what I've seen so far. I think these would make great quarter calls! Sometimes I think that people get too.... wordy and not impressionistic enough in their quarter calls.

Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2007 11:53 am
by JacklynSnyder1o1
Thanks jcrowfoot!=D
I was having trouble with the last line. I didn't know how to express it. I'm glad you liked it!