My poem is in a contest of sorts...

[Addicus]

Well, my poem is in a contest and I need to get people to rate it.... I would appreciate it if everyone who reads this would just click the link below and rate my poem. Please and Thank You!


http://www.poetry.com/voteforme/poemvot ... D=12316959


Blessings
-Wynter

[SeekerGray]

That was beautiful. Perfectly rhymed, amazing coordination between words, and it told a story...

A+++++

[[HangedMan]]

Nice.

[Addicus]

thank you! its always nice to hear good things about ones work :p

[LUNAAMOR]

i also voted
it was a real nice work

[Heka]

I voted. A little while ago but yeah.

[learn2lovem3]

I love how the last stanza mirrored the first stanza. Reminds me of a type of poem we could write in creative writing. It's a class I'm currently taking, but I forget the name of the poem style.

=) I voted, btw.
While I was reading it, I actually saw what the words were describing, although in my mind, I saw an individual, faceless, waiting for an actual bus. And of course it was pouring out. And to me, it was as if they forgot what time it was supposed to arrive and realized in the end they had spent too much time waiting around for a bus that would never arrive for they had missed it.

I loved it! (=

[Addicus]

thank you learn2lovem3 ... i wrote this poem while I was waiting for a plane... cause they kept pushing the layover back and back until I ended up waiting like 7 hours just to get on a 45min flight to my hometown.. :p